Here is the prompt for day twenty-eight of the April PAD Challenge:
For today’s prompt, write a poem about a smell. Similar to Day 6’s
prompt about writing a poem about a sound, today’s prompt involves thinking
about the various good and bad smells that fill the world. Pick one smell (or a
variety, I suppose), and write a poem.
Some Things Remind Me of That Bubble Gum |
You Smell
Like Bubble Gum
Sometimes
when I try to write,
I smell that bubble gum
I hid in my closet
in the house
where I grew up.
I remember feeling lucky.
You’d given it to me
for Christmas
when I was sixteen.
I hadn’t seen you in years
when you made
that surprise visit
and handed
me a gift. I carried
that present upstairs
like a newborn, pondering
what lay swaddled
underneath the paper.
I ripped it open
and found gumballs
lined up side by side
like soldiers at rest.
I popped one
into my mouth
and was taken back
to our bowling alley
field trip
where the vending machine
shot out chewing gum
like bullets
from a machine gun.
It took me a year
to chew all that gum.
With each fruity ball I rolled
between my teeth, I wondered
when you’d roll back into my life.
I never got that lucky.
The next time I saw you,
your casket reminded me
of that bubblegum
box.
when I try to write,
I smell that bubble gum
I hid in my closet
in the house
where I grew up.
I remember feeling lucky.
You’d given it to me
for Christmas
when I was sixteen.
I hadn’t seen you in years
when you made
that surprise visit
and handed
me a gift. I carried
that present upstairs
like a newborn, pondering
what lay swaddled
underneath the paper.
I ripped it open
and found gumballs
lined up side by side
like soldiers at rest.
I popped one
into my mouth
and was taken back
to our bowling alley
field trip
where the vending machine
shot out chewing gum
like bullets
from a machine gun.
It took me a year
to chew all that gum.
With each fruity ball I rolled
between my teeth, I wondered
when you’d roll back into my life.
I never got that lucky.
The next time I saw you,
your casket reminded me
of that bubblegum
box.
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The narrative pulled me in from beginning to end. Love the way you tell a story...
ReplyDeleteThank you, Nurit.
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