The Day Twenty-Three prompt for PAD:
For today’s prompt, write a location poem. Location could be physical–like the laundromat, a public park, a glacier, flying saucer, etc. Or location could be emotional, psychological, metaphysical, or some other kind of word that ends in -al. Or surprise everyone!
Rescue Me |
Secure My Rescue
Speechless lives inside self-
control where silence bobs on dreary
surfaces lapping at your shores
one thousand miles away.
Stealing windjammer’s license
to play with grainy bits of sand
floating
in the sound,
you sculpted granules into castles as I hovered
face down on superficial tongue, pushed
back and forth by windy signals, heard
marooned pirate’s torn purple flag flapping
in the wind, found a glinting veil of morning
fog to hide behind. Speechless lives
inside this ocean in my veins, pulsing, reserved,
reversed deserver, my floppy limbs caved over,
connected to you still, my love’s fortress demolished
by an unsuspecting force
the sea
could not see
in
herself.
Speechless lives inside self-
control where silence bobs on dreary
surfaces lapping at your shores
one thousand miles away.
Stealing windjammer’s license
to play with grainy bits of sand
floating
in the sound,
you sculpted granules into castles as I hovered
face down on superficial tongue, pushed
back and forth by windy signals, heard
marooned pirate’s torn purple flag flapping
in the wind, found a glinting veil of morning
fog to hide behind. Speechless lives
inside this ocean in my veins, pulsing, reserved,
reversed deserver, my floppy limbs caved over,
connected to you still, my love’s fortress demolished
by an unsuspecting force
the sea
could not see
in
herself.
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I don't feel competent to judge the quality of poetry.....I just know what I like.....I really like the "Speechless lives" lines, both of them. I like the relationship between the ocean currents and the blood flowing. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, April! I appreciate the support!
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