The prompt for Day Eleven of PAD:
For today’s prompt, make a statement the title of your poem and either respond to or expand upon the title. Some example titles might include: “A Date Which Will Live in Infamy;” “Guns Don’t Kill People, I Do;” “This Is Your Brain on Drugs;” “Smile for the Camera,” and “Be Kind Rewind.” Of course, there’s an incredible number of possible titles; pick one and start poeming!
What Do You Dream Of? |
Instead of Counting Sheep
Count on me to lie
awake wondering what you
dream of without me.
awake wondering what you
dream of without me.
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I thought I would add in the other version, which some people on Poetic Asides preferred:
I thought I would add in the other version, which some people on Poetic Asides preferred:
Instead of Counting Sheep
Count on me to lie
wakeful, wondering what you
wakeful, wondering what you
dream of without me.
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Beautiful.
ReplyDeletelove the feel it creates in so very few words
Thank you so much.
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